We pitched our initial opening scene idea to the other groups and teachers within our class. From this, we were given constructive feedback on how we can improve our idea.
We were told that the plot of our thriller was good and that it matched the conventions of our genre. However, the way in which we decided to film our opening to the film needed to be thought about again. This is because the idea seemed to be 'too bland' and needed to be a little more interesting to match our genre. Also, because the actual plot of the film was good, we chose to include a fast chase opening, however within the feedback, we were given the idea that maybe we need to make it a little more simple and slower, which we have now decided to take into consideration when we re-think our opening scene.
So, now, we are re-thinking and re-writing our opening scene, making it much slower and simple than our previous idea, trying to use inspiration from other thriller films to spark more ideas for us, such as 'Lost In Translation' and 'American Beauty'.
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